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This heart beats, before you, during you, and after you... as does yours, our hearts beat no matter what happens, it speeds up, it slows down, it remains constant, it reminds us with each beat that we are wonderfully made to love and fear, and with every beat I'm reminded how I miss the feel of your heart even if I only felt it for a few moments, I long for your counter rhythm, and as I'm with you, know that the longer I'm with you, the closer together our hearts will beat, until they beat in union, they beat for one another, they know when something is wrong with the other one, so when you feel my heart and it seems too fast or too slow do not worry precious one, my heart is merely trying to learn yours for better or worse, and it will keep trying until something forces it to stop.
©2008-2009 ~Rolleth
:iconrolleth:

Author's Comments

A improv thing I wrote for Emily to reassure her. Things are rather chaotic in my life, and I wanted her to know how much she means to me, as my kichoo.

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:iconaoddd:
Great piece, my friend, and hang in there.
:iconrolleth:
*hugs* Thanks.

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When I find the one that thinks as I do, believes as I do, and loves me as I love them, then Ill be complete.
:iconkhsky:
aw soo cute! uh yer comment about the work, otherwise intense stuff man

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"OOOOooh! wow you can take black and white photos of chair, look it has a shadow, Omg you think your so deep."
"well... screw you, i happen to like that chair.
:iconcitizenerased1090:
wow thats really good, its deep and meaningful and (altough i speak as a total outcast and dont no these ppl) im sure it helped her and gave her the evidence-or perhaps reminder - that there is someone who will stick by her no matter what


(i apologize if this is somewhat weird - trust me, no weirdness intended, just my thoughts ^_^)

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I've always known a ghost like me can disappear in a moment--I'm my own worst casualty, anything I touch can be broken
:iconrolleth:
Thanks for the comment ^^ *hug*

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When I find the one that thinks as I do, believes as I do, and loves me as I love them, then Ill be complete.
:iconcitizenerased1090:
your most welcome :)

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I've always known a ghost like me can disappear in a moment--I'm my own worst casualty, anything I touch can be broken
:iconstudent-4-ever:
This is really a beautiful poem. I particularly like "with every beat I'm reminded how I miss the feel of your heart even if I only felt it for a few moments" The only suggestion I would make is formatting into short lines instead of one whole paragraph. This is a beautiful poem! I love it!

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